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]]> Comment on LAST by michelle http://serenelaw.wordpress.com/2008/08/04/last/#comment-24 michelle Wed, 06 Aug 2008 13:22:40 +0000 http://serenelaw.wordpress.com/?p=42#comment-24 yes yes. i would definitely miss t-bonessss!!! our bone class! :D so cute! x) yes yes. i would definitely miss t-bonessss!!! our bone class! :D

so cute! x)

]]> Comment on Dialogue by theredpants http://serenelaw.wordpress.com/dialogue/#comment-23 theredpants Wed, 06 Aug 2008 08:45:09 +0000 http://serenelaw.wordpress.com/?page_id=40#comment-23 Very believable dialogue and good set up for the tension of the scene as well, with dips and peaks like in a real conversation. Well done! Very believable dialogue and good set up for the tension of the scene as well, with dips and peaks like in a real conversation. Well done!

]]> Comment on Visual Trigger by theredpants http://serenelaw.wordpress.com/visual-trigger/#comment-22 theredpants Wed, 06 Aug 2008 08:40:14 +0000 http://serenelaw.wordpress.com/?page_id=24#comment-22 This is a tragic situation but not really a story in the conventions of greek tragedy. In order to write a greek tragedy, you need the protagonist to cause his or her own downfall inadvertently - that's key. This is a tragic situation but not really a story in the conventions of greek tragedy. In order to write a greek tragedy, you need the protagonist to cause his or her own downfall inadvertently – that’s key.

]]> Comment on People-watch by theredpants http://serenelaw.wordpress.com/people-watch/#comment-21 theredpants Wed, 06 Aug 2008 08:36:54 +0000 http://serenelaw.wordpress.com/?page_id=12#comment-21 There's not much physical description of the second character and not much of your insights and thoughts on the first character. These are very necessary in observation because they help you create well-rounded and believeable characters for your stories. There’s not much physical description of the second character and not much of your insights and thoughts on the first character. These are very necessary in observation because they help you create well-rounded and believeable characters for your stories.

]]> Comment on 50 words stories by theredpants http://serenelaw.wordpress.com/50-words-stories/#comment-20 theredpants Wed, 06 Aug 2008 08:34:47 +0000 http://serenelaw.wordpress.com/?page_id=10#comment-20 With the exception of Story 5, the rest of them are essentially extended openers. You need to work sieving out the content that is unnecessary because in such an assignment, that is crucial because you have no time to waste (same with making short films.) With the exception of Story 5, the rest of them are essentially extended openers. You need to work sieving out the content that is unnecessary because in such an assignment, that is crucial because you have no time to waste (same with making short films.)

]]> Comment on HOHOHO by michelle http://serenelaw.wordpress.com/2008/06/02/hohoho/#comment-19 michelle Tue, 03 Jun 2008 02:30:04 +0000 http://serenelaw.wordpress.com/?p=35#comment-19 HAHA. holiday soon! :D aww. taiwan! i also want to go. =x lols! and, this is the last post i think... but of course, if you want to continue posting also can lah. xD HAHA. holiday soon! :D

aww. taiwan! i also want to go. =x lols!

and, this is the last post i think…
but of course, if you want to continue posting also can lah. xD

]]> Comment on HOHOHO by yapliyu http://serenelaw.wordpress.com/2008/06/02/hohoho/#comment-18 yapliyu Mon, 02 Jun 2008 16:37:11 +0000 http://serenelaw.wordpress.com/?p=35#comment-18 I wanna go taiwan too! haha. never been there... last post it is. I wanna go taiwan too! haha. never been there… last post it is.

]]> Comment on DEADlines by entangledd http://serenelaw.wordpress.com/2008/05/26/deadlines/#comment-17 entangledd Fri, 30 May 2008 15:37:24 +0000 http://serenelaw.wordpress.com/?p=31#comment-17 HAHAHA! deadlines are so dead. and yes. i NEED SLEEP too!!! 30 hours? it's like a little too much. hahaha. but, if it is possible, wouldn't it be nice~~ xD HAHAHA! deadlines are so dead.

and yes. i NEED SLEEP too!!!

30 hours? it’s like a little too much. hahaha. but, if it is possible, wouldn’t it be nice~~ xD

]]> Comment on True and false stories by sasketchewan http://serenelaw.wordpress.com/true-and-false-stories/#comment-13 sasketchewan Mon, 26 May 2008 16:14:23 +0000 http://serenelaw.wordpress.com/?page_id=30#comment-13 yea first one is true. cos ur siblings not tempted by snacks meh?? i will though..AHAH. yea first one is true. cos ur siblings not tempted by snacks meh?? i will though..AHAH.

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